Douglas Milewski (dacuteturtle) wrote,
Douglas Milewski

Onto the Second Pass

I'm onto my second pass of The Phoenix and the Swan. This is the part where I look at my story and realize that I used English grammar, but only optionally, and only where necessary. Yeesh. And that whole story party, where one paragraph leads to another? That was optional, too.

I hope that my draft improves as I go along, or I'm in for a world of work.

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