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Double Jack

I wrapped the first draft of Double Jack last night. 26k words in 15 days.

This book came out so much easier than any other book so far. Not having to make everything up greatly improves speed.

Would you read this book?

Jack is a wizard in hiding, happily keeping his head low. When the gangster Sloe Joe say, "Hey, I think my sister would like you," he introduces Jack to a dangerous situation and an amazing woman. For the love of Cybmeline, Jack walks the tight rope between disaster and bliss, and if he's successful, loses everything that he loves.

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katrinb
Apr. 16th, 2013 01:46 pm (UTC)
My inner editor is itching to rewrite that a bit. Would you be offended?
dacuteturtle
Apr. 16th, 2013 03:55 pm (UTC)
Not at all. Blurbs are damned difficult.
katrinb
Apr. 16th, 2013 04:51 pm (UTC)
Tightened it up a little, I think. Also changed the spelling of Cymbeline, but if I'm wrong, feel free to change it back.

Jack is a wizard in hiding, happy to keep his head low and avoid trouble. But when the gangster Sloe Joe introduces Jack to his sister, he finds himself caught in a dangerous situation for the sake of an amazing woman. For the love of Cymbeline, Jack will walk the tight rope between disaster and bliss - but if he's successful, he will lose everything that he loves.
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