I hit the shed a little more. I dropped a coat of paint on it between the rain. Did I say that the weekend looked clear from one end to the other? It still rained.
On Monday, we went off to the Air and Space annex to see planes. Hers Truly was truly ecstatic. But the best thing EVA was the ELEVATOR. It had glass, and you could see yourself going up and down. Hers Truly demanded many rides.
I continued pulling chapter 2 apart again. Re-engineering a character's motivation so that it matches future actions but also gives them more color is a tough job.