December 9th, 2015

Macbeth the Usurper

Double Jack Draft 8

I wrapped up Double Jack draft #8 this morning. This thing is getting there. I like this ending more than the last ending. This story is starting to feel like its getting somewhere. (I've said that before, so take it with a grain of salt.) Most of the previous draft survived, and most of the development came from extending the ending further. I recognized more promises to wrap up.