Douglas Milewski (dacuteturtle) wrote,
Douglas Milewski
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Chapter 4

I finally figured out what to do with that irksome Chapter 4. I'm cutting it. I really don't need it. It added some things to the story, but really, the chapter wound up not working, and removing it helps keep the flow of the story going.

Huzzah. Damned chapter.
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